In 2009 on Easter eve day when school finished and my sisters came to pick me up because it was raining so hard. They said we don’t have Easter eggs but they were so lieing because my mum was home and she said our Easter eggs are on the top of the shelves. When my mum said Who wants the football Easter egg Jessica said her. Then my mum said who wants the sponge bob one, Rose said her. Then she said to me my Easter egg is on the floor but it was the cat poo. Then my big sister gave me the big one like a pig. The End.
Hi Angle
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your entries and I am impressed that your class has such an exciting way of publishing their work. I hope some time I will be able to do this for my students. I also like the fact that you put your success criteria up as this gives such a clear outline of where you are heading. Thank you for sharing
Tala