Monday, June 27, 2011

Surprise

Something brushed up against my foot and my surprise turned to horror as I looked down I saw.....A HUGE Snake slithering between my feet. It nearly bit me but I ran as fast as I could. Suddenly I triped over a branch and I fall over and it nearly bit me again. I got up as fast as I could and ran and ran.

I called my dad then he came and said what is it I said a snake nearly bit me then he went to the garage and opened the garage door and there was a huge snake it was red white and black. But suddenly My dad could not get the x so he was panicking that me and him would die he was trying to think of some think because the snake was coming close to me and I said “dad dad help me then he said hold on” because the snake nearly bit him so I sawed a gun on the ground so”I said dad I found a gun” then he told me to shot the snake and I shot the other snake coming close to my dad.....

Then my dad said great job for killing the snake and finding the gun he said keep it up. Then we went to tell mom about the story then my gave me a piece of a box of roses chocolate. THE END BY MARY I.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mary,

    I enjoyed reading your story, I hope you never really encounter a snake like that!

    Best,
    Miss Rogers

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  2. Hi Mary I
    I enjoyed reading your story about the snacks I love how you put vocab. I can't wait to read another post.

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  3. Hi mary I reallly liked your story you wrote it was a snake I saw on a movie called snakes on the plane that was to many sankes I really like it how you used vocab and .full stops. Besties serena

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