Monday, July 30, 2012

The Archery Olympics

 This man is concentrating so that he can win.
His left arm is straight and steady. He looks like he is angry.
He is about to pull the trigger to aim for the red dot on the target.
He is getting a little bit red as he is using his strength and focusing on his target.
If he gets the target he will win.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Mary,
    I never thought you can write Invective paragraphs like that Keep up the great work and I cant wait to see more blog post.

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  2. Nice photo Mary it looks really cool.Also you are right he is getting red.I like your writing.Keep up the great work.

    By Alexandria.J

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