Monday, October 29, 2012

Lost in the Forest.

Setting
Forest and City



BrainStorm
Forest
Walking
Rocky ground
Terrible day
Colourful umbrella


Characters
Tom
Lynn
Bird


Hook
Long ago there lived 2 people going for a walk on a nice day. But suddenly it started to rain. ‘’A terrible rain’’ Said Tom as they suddenly saw a person in front of them pulling up their umbrella.

Later on they keep walking on the rocky rocks until they got out of the forest. Lynn and Tom kept walking until they landed up into a bigger forest. They couldn’t find their way out. So they said ‘’HELP help’’.
The rain got bigger and bigger. So they were stoking wet. ‘’Their their’’ said Tom to Lynn I can see a Bird. ‘’Oh no we need HELP’’ Lynn said in an angry way.



‘’NO’’ Tom said we can use the bird to track the way where we are going. ‘’Where are we going’’ Lynn said. Tom said to Lynn ‘’We are going into the city to find a new place just right for us’’. So they carried on walking on the rocky rocks in the forest. ‘’Finding a new place is very hard but we are going to try’’ [Both of them said]Thank you [Bird] they both. A long they went into the big city. Then there it was a big Hotel. [FINALLY] they made it just in time because of the other man brought it.

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