Thursday, June 20, 2013

SWW WEEK 7

It was a cold, dark night and I was alone in a strange house. Suddenly I heard a noise! ‘’BOOM went the storm’’ as Vanessa got a fright the door was moving as slow as it could going to shut. Vanessas mum Efilona was calling for Vanessa as she disappeared. Efilona was panicking as her heart started to beep fast as it could. ‘’VANESSA VANESSA’’ Efilona  shouted as her face turned RED.

‘’I’m back’’ said Vanessa, as her mum Efilona said ‘’Phew where have you been my loving daughter’’. ‘’OH mum I have been to my best friends house Boaza’’. Efilona said ‘’Vanessa you tell me where you're going next time’’, as Vanessa ran up to her mum and hugged her. The ceiling was leaking as Efilona told Vanessa to ‘’get the bucket’’ running as fast as she could to get the bucket Vanessa tripped on the steps as, she heard ghost sounds calling her name  ‘’V A N N E S S A’’ quietly. She sprinted back to her mum crying in tears. Her mum asked her ‘’what happened?’’ but Vanessa couldn’t explain.

Later on as Vanessa stopped crying her mum went to check the steps but no one was their. ‘’HELP HELP’’ cried Vanessa as her mother ran back to check on her, but as soon as she got their Vanessa was gone.

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