Monday, July 8, 2013

Prospective Students




The boy felt determined and nervous while he was climbing the deep towering mountain. Thinking in his head, “Phew finally I made it, I can see the dojo up ahead, I hope I
make it in”.Standing in front of the enormous door made him anxious,, trying to improve to the Sensei that he could do better, he sat down and meditate for (Day and Night). The boy got ready to do his karate lessons so then he stood up and suddenly kicked the door opened.

Para 1:
The boy felt determined and nervous while he was climbing the deep towering mountain. Finally the boy made it up to the top, with his muscles aching feeling exhausted. Thinking in his head, “Phew finally I made it, I can see the dojo up ahead, I hope I
make it in”.  

Para 2:
Walking steadily he thought about what should he do once he
gets there. Standing in front of the enormous door made him anxious, as the sensei opens the door slowly and quietly, suddenly he pointed at the sign. So then the little boy thought wrong.

Para 3:
As the boy turned around sadly disappointed with his shoulders dropped and his head fell. He really looked upset once he was walking back. Trying to improve to the Sensei that he could do better, he sat down and meditate for (Day and Night). The boy was still meditating when the Sensei came out slowly and the boy stopped, but the Sensei still pointed at the sign, the boy thought all along that he was saying ‘’GO AWAY’’.

The boy got ready to do his karate lessons so then he stood up and suddenly kicked the door opened.

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