Mary & Senolita Features of a narrative 1

                                                  Story 1

Once upon a time there lived a little girl and boy named Jack and Lisa. They lived in a little hut near the forest they were peeking out of there hut to see if the big bad witch was waiting outside of their little hut. But as they were looking they could not see anyone out there, They suddenly locked the door so the witch couldn't come in the hut. The door was broken so they tried and tried to lock the door but as soon as they heard a sound they thought it was the big bad witch so they tried not to make a sound so the witch doesn't hear them.

Jack the brother was holding Lisa’s mouth so she doesn't make any sound but she had to sneeze. Then the witch heard so she went into the little hut and the witch was finding the children and then they were running away because the witch was coming after them. Then they said  ‘’HELP HELP’’ but no one heard them. So they keep  running so  then they ran into the forest then they saw the witch and then the witch hopped on her powerful broom and came flying towards them.

Then finally the witch grabbed Jack and Lisa. She took them to her gingerbread house and said “MWAHAHAHAHA” and then she put them into a cage. Lisa was hungry so she went to put his hand out of the cage and got a cupcake from the table and then the witch grabbed it off her and took Lisa out of the cage and was putting her into the oven but as she was doing that Jack got out of the cage because it was made out of gingerbeard cage.

So the Jack ate the gingerbread and then he got out the witch turned around and then Lisa ran from the oven. Then Jack ran up to the witch and pressed her into the oven and she was burning. Jack and Lisa took some food then left to go back home and to have something to eat
                                       
                                      …....AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER......